a good decision to use the type to steer the viewer back toward your initial concept. i'm a bit worried now that it might be telegraphing the meaning a bit much. but that also could present an editing challenge. how can you build up the tension in the typographic (and image) narrative without giving away the word until you absolutely have to?also, too many images in here. some of them are kind of funny (superman, phone, etc) but kind of miss the point. now, if you had sound, which you eventually will, maybe we hear the phone ring but don't see it. but for now you have to solve that visually.
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